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From the moment I first saw you my lungs collapsed.
Choking, weezing, I gasped for air.
My breath swept away.
As if expending the life out of me with every pump of your heart.
I saw you, glancing at me.
Did you notice?
Sweaty palms, unsure steps
Wondering if you like me.
Head up, good posture.
Am I walking funny?
No, just my imagination.
Smile, wait, not too big, smile.
I'm petrified to speak but I want to whisper in your ear.
I want to dance, hold you tight.
What's holding me back? Wanna Dance?
Silhouettes in a moon lit promenade.
Show me how to love you. I'll show you how much I care.
Left foot, right foot, dip.  Caress your beautiful hair.
Your beauty is unlike anything, it must have escaped heaven.
And god must be upset.
Take the time, get to know me.
I promise you will not regret.
I want you in my life.
Did you notice?
©2006-2009 ~phoenixrising
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This is how I felt the moment I laid eyes on you.

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A very beautiful and heartfelt piece, I love it.

Great work. :clap:

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"Those who stand for nothing are likely to fall for anything."
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I love this. I especially like the line "Show me how to love you. I'll show you how much I care." That's how I'm feeling about a someone right now.

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In case you failed to notice, in case you failed to see, this is my heart bleeding before you, this is me down on my knees.

You do not love someone under the condition that this person would always love you back.

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