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Burning for you

Lifes greatest sorrow burns emptily. Yet it feeds off my heart.
I wish you could see. Need someone, anyone, to hold me tight. Wishing and dreaming as one throughout the night. I look into your eyes, there is nothing more beautiful. You pick up my pieces, small fractions of life, and ease this pain. Who are you? I don't really know. Noticing nothing but your presence, your radiance, your inexplicable beauty. I call out your name, will you call out mine? Hold me tighter... its getting cold. Take my jacket, I will not let go. I trust you, if you'll only see.

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Dream ChildA most lovely girl with a sparkle in her eye With a shell that could auction off for a trillion yen Her perfect shapes would wake any dreaming man's insatiable desires Luscious, curvy, momentous waves Came crashing down upon the reef with tremendous force, As if suffering from her ensnarement was not enough, Crashing down on my heart, forcing its tentacles therein
With every inch of strength, I starve myself Knowing this barricade is keeping me out Her heart is safeguarded in my chest Mahogany and silver, rusted shut at the bottom depths of the ocean Her boyfriend is una Dream Child
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Impending malfunctionShe is an angel Broken, lost in her way Tired of this world I know she will not stay For, I am flawed On the outside, scraping away at my insides As the yellow rose, withers And the black mascara Shows its dark secret That run down her eyes She is worth something more More than what he can give This explosive pressure, skull throbbing, heart...aching I want to scream Want me, for me!!! It won't happen I guarantee The way you look into my heart A dud, a dull borish sonnet It's vinyl covered with layers of dust and leaves. Impending malfunction
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TimeTime, It went by fast when words would appear. A voice sent from above, to silence my worries Simple notions to block my mind Of the troubles at hand. How could I be so blind Of her radical beauty, With eyes of a devilish seductress. If I were to paint the world as I see her eyes Angels of heaven would be seen. There would be beauty amongst all non believers. I dabble in thoughts of closeness. These words that pop up on my screen Show much that she is there. To think, I'll be alone with her, In our own little world. These words that appear in my ha Time
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escapeeHelp me escape This prison guarded by my very own heart It says to stay but I want to go She loves me so And I for her Yet something tells me, that there's more What is it like to be free I feel chained up, Gagged and broken Will you see right through me Untie clasps and lend me your hand Experience me for who I am And wander about in the sea. escapee
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Updating this profile

Thu Sep 27, 2007, 5:50 PM

I am updating stuff and adding some poems. Most of the new ones *submitted today and later* are roughdrafts. So yea, there are a few completed somewhere..I just forgot where I put them. Thanks

-John

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Mood: Sadness
Listening to: AlkalineTrio
Drinking: Fat Tire

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Current Residence: Lancaster,CA
Interests: you
Favourite movie: pulp fiction
Favourite band or musician: stuff
Favourite genre of music: Punk Rock, rock, metal, classic rock, indie
Favourite artist: at the moment none
Favourite poet or writer: E.A.Poe for his awesome style
Operating System: xP Home Edition what else? maybe Linux..the penguin is sick looking
MP3 player of choice: iTouch
Shell of choice: turtle shell. Ninja style possibly
Wallpaper of choice: snowfall or ironGrid
Skin of choice: human
Favourite game: Counter-Strike
Favourite gaming platform: shooter
Personal Quote: for sure
Tools of the Trade: Word Processor and a Notepad / Photoshop

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~leapnugget

Mar 3, 2008, 2:26:21 PM

hello agein

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=FreakyBabe

Feb 18, 2008, 8:36:31 AM

thanks for the fav john

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~dnlbrtln

Feb 15, 2008, 1:38:15 AM

thank you for the

on my corridor wallpaper [link]

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greetings from hungary ~dnlbrtln

~6615015150

Dec 30, 2007, 7:50:53 PM

I'm actually near Pasadena. Why do you ask?

~M-Khaos

Sep 30, 2007, 12:09:33 PM

wow, i really do love your work!!!

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~tmtrcclby

Jun 14, 2006, 11:46:31 AM

Thank you for the compliment and the

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"For the Lord's hand is not shortened that it cannot save, nor his ear too dulled to hear."
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~Tessaii

Jun 13, 2006, 12:10:23 AM

Well, my real name is Tessa, but my dear friend started calling me Tessai (but that screenname was taken). And yes, Tessai from Ninja Scroll.

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-Tessa